Tuesday, February 7, 2012

peer corrections



1. The improv group is currently preparing for their next production.
The improv group is preparing for their its next production.

2. Recent budgets cuts have not had an enormous affect on the program.
Recent budget cuts have not effected the program.

3. The band has been touring for 6 months.
The band has been touring for six months.

4. Arts and Programming Advisor for Student Involvement Angel Nava said participants can listen to the artists description of their sculptures.
Angel Nava, arts and programming adviser for Student Involvement said descriptions of artist's sculptures can be heard by particapants  

5. Every one had a really great time at the rally!
Everyone had a great time at the rally.

6. Over 150 people attended the festival from September 14-16th.
More than 150 people attended the festival from Sept. 14-16.

7. Eric W. Hoffman is a Clinical Assistant Professor in the Edward R. Morrow College of Communications.
 Eric W. Hoffman is a clinical assistant professor in the Edward R. Murrow College of Communication.

8. He said “Its always great seeing such a wonderful turn out each week.”
"It's always great seeing such a wonderful turnout each week," he said.

9. The festival is sponsored by the Pullman Chamber of Commerce and is now in their third year of operation.
The Pullman Chamber of Commerce will sponser the festival for its third year.

10. “I love shopping in this kind of environment, it is much better then inside a grocery store”, she said
"I love shopping in this kind of environment. It is much better than inside a grocery store:" she said.

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